Grammar Giggle – Lobster Facts Corrections

A friend sent me this picture from her recent Florida vacation. I’ll explain the many errors.

1. First paragraph. First red circle should be “larger” and second small red circle should be the closing parenthesis mark.
2. Third paragraph – extra space between “omega” and the dash.
3. Next red circle, “lobster” isn’t capitalized in other parts of the paper.
4. The next two red circles – the first circled word should be “than” and there should be a period at the end of the sentence.
5. The last red circle should be “younger ones” if you’re going to talk about multiple “older lobsters.”

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